Film Set

Film Set

Until you get a real, veteran Producer,  TV Showrunner,  or Agent, to READ your script and give you his honest feedback, you just don’t know for sure if your material is desirable to the studios.

You have got to submit your best version of your script around town.  Studios are not going to buy your script because it’s a good idea.

How’s the 3 act structure?  The character arcs?  The inciting incident, the “no turning back” moment,  the third act “all is lost,” and “dark night of the soul” plot points.

I will help you get everything in order so you have the best chance of selling your script.

How it works.

I read people’s screenplays, from the point of view of someone who’s sold screenplays, who’s been hired to develop them, been hired to do rewrites for them (even by Steven Speilberg)

I have written dozens of TV pilots, and created 5 TV shows, that went to series, some for 8 years.  I have written for over 30 TV shows, on staff, or freelance.

I have worked for a Studio Story Department, evaluating screenplays submitted for sale, and given RECOMMENDATIONS or PASSES based on the strength of material.

I know what producers and studios are looking for. It was my job to look for strong scripts and pass on the rest.

Send me your screenplay, your TV pilot, your spec TV episode, and I’ll go over it in detail, figure out how it could be improved to the point where it measures up to Professional Standards.

We’ll talk in person, or over the phone. If you’re stuck, I’ll help you come up with the fixes; the scenes you need, the dialogue you need, the story structure you need, or  the characters you need to sell you script.

I will promise you, that I will give you only CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, that will improve you script.

Free Call.  Call for 20 minute phone consult. 310-850-4707

David SilvermanWork with David Silverman, veteran writer of 20 years, a writer who’s written for over 30 TV shows.  (for Robin Williams, ALF, Newhart, Tom Arnold, Rosanne, Drew  Carey, Sarah Silverman, Pee Wee Herman and South Park)

A writer who’s sold screenplays on a pitch, (De Laurentis Productions), been hired to develop screenplays (one  based on the National Lampoon’s “Politenessman”), who’s written screenplays for Imagine (“Blowhard” takeoff on Die Hard), has written scripts for, and done feature rewrites for Steven Speilberg.

A writers who’s sold dozens of television pilots, and have had 5 picked up for series, to Disney, to Fox, Nikelodeon, and to Warner Brothers, 

 If you have a spec feature or tv spec script; I’ll read it and give you Professional level feedback on,

  • *Plot
  • *Character Arcs
  • *Dialogue
  • *Production Values
  • *Visual Storytelling
  • *Pacing 

Email me your script; at

If it’s as mind-blowing as you think it is then I’ll pass it along to my industry friends with my recommendation.

And if it needs work, we can meet (or on Facetime/Phone)  to discuss how to polish your script.

We’ll keep meeting (or on FaceTime/Phone), if you like, until your script is at a professional level.

If your script measures up, I will absolutely share your script with my contacts in Hollywood .

If you don’t have a spec script yet, NO PROBLEM. I’ll help you write one.

For a free 20 minute phone consult, call me, David Silverman


For information about fees, go to the Contact and Fees page.  If you like we can create a specially priced package for you.